The moment you laid eyes on me
I was eyeing you
Rosy lips and dimpled chin
Well, you weren’t a baby
You locked your fingers with mine
Held it tight, not letting go
Fawning, loving and telling me stories
Well, you acted like a young boy
You played games with me
Letting me win, smiled for me – glee
Racy, loving and spunky
Well, you were a boy
You looked at me,
Drilling through my heart – holding
The moment within you, me - deeper
Well, you were a man in love
You played to win
Beat me black and blue
Gloating and bloating in pride – Love in vain
Well, you were a pig
You came back with flowers
Touched tenderly, lick my wounds
I contemplated a second chance for you - I love
Well, you are a dog
You draw me close, stick it in
You look for ways to use me,
No use and you hurt me again - with love,
Well, you *are* a man
Love it is - toxic !
/** a spin off - of Reflector's blog http://reflector.sulekha.com/blog/post/2008/02/the-closer-you-get.htm - I don't feel that acidic to bring out the toxic quite right..but was inspired :)
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yeh i did. is that bad or good? lol. later
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Wow, you came back! Thanks. I forgot about it. :)
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oh my bad. i mean that damn was bout being overwhelmed in a good way bout your writing.
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Wits,
Love is challenging to define...when winds blow differently and people start appreciating each other... then it would be love again...right? if not it is a dead end. People change for better and for worse.
Thanks :)
Meera
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Raja
Thank you! For reading both and appreciating for what it is :))
Thanks again.Appreciate it
Meera
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toxic. exactly that kind of abusive love is toxic. should it even be called love?
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Meera, a different dressing to Reffy's thoughts, but cleverly done. I say the same thing I told Reffy - there are two sides to a coin. Love is nothing but appreciating the strengths in the partner, and ignoring the flaws - yes this is applicable to both partners. Otherwise, Love does turn toxic.
However, a beatiful write-up with excellent choice o words...... regards .. Raja
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Rimabiswas,
Thank you :)
Meera
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ironical but true..
good work
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Komlet
Thank you :)
Meera
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